Angel of Death

KJ you should definitely think about continuing this. Here's some things I liked about this: 1. J'adore your character building and how you painted the background, 2. Your vocabulaire was ...

This was beautiful, and I think your friend would love it because I sure do. Well anyways, the only thing I saw was that some of your sentences were not ...

It's nice to be among fellow Twilight fans, well anyways I think that Bella and Edward will get married but Jacob might get in between everything because he really isn't ...

I liked this, great job :D :D :D :D

This was incredible! I've never seen anything like this, I mean how did you come up with all the names for vampires? You really are a fantastic fantasy writer. The ...

I see nothing wrong with this as always. I love how you capture the readers minds with real feelings somebody might have in this situation. You are a very great ...

This was really good, you should post more. But there was some problems... The vampire heard me, When the MC asks "What are you?" it seems a little dumb to ...

I loved this ending BBB, wow you are an amazing writer. I really enjoyed how you tied everything in and the last sentence I really loved it. Crap. I think ...

Okay the truth is I skimmed through this *sorry* but I like what I see so far. So Sophie comes from a family of vampire hunters, eh? And I'm guessing ...

I saw some problems that I think need to be addressed. 1. Put spaces between the periods.Don't have your sentences looking bunched together like this one does. 2. When someone ...

Hey Heatherish!! I am so happy that you finally decided to post another chapter of Lavender Rose. I love Lukas's change of emotion. He acted like a boy with his ...

I loved this! Did you ever think about turning this into a book? If you did this would be so great...its fantastic now but I love your characters. This was ...

I really think that this has promise...its just that 1. It really needs to be spaced out more 2. I want to hear more descriptions you know like Quinn was ...

I really loved this...*sniffles* you painted the portrait of a break-up and a pained soul so well. You made me feel so bad for this guy. I really really am ...

Wow this was interesting. I liked the imagery and the story you told but I feel something is missing. Where is the emotions? Maybe I've read the wrong way or ...